I'm feeling oddly critical/helpful, so if anyone has a sketch they want me to redline/ask advice on, please e-mail it to me at NicoleSD at AOL dot COM and I will send it back with a redline and comments. Just so you know, if you're going to ask me to redline it be prepared for honesty. I don't sugar coat things and I am going to assume you want me to be serious about it.
Make sure in the title of the e-mail you state who you are though otherwise i'll think its spam. Thank you!