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Critique me plz! I scrapped the original idea.



Reference pics here: http://yerf.com/iB_html/uploads/post-6-30740-MARIAHREF2.jpg

Thanks in advance!
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huskie666 From: huskie666 Date: November 9th, 2004 06:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
dude.. youre fine o.o;
i think.. it's the coloring you should worry more for...
~~Huskie
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: November 9th, 2004 06:52 pm (UTC) (Link)
damn my perfectionism! Thanks 'skie =)
buttfacemakani From: buttfacemakani Date: November 9th, 2004 06:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
*squints* hmm.. k i did lines because I can't speak proper english.



liiike, the front part of his forehead could me.. moved up? or out? just a little.. er.. *points to pic* x) i can't explain and i don't know the names of anything xp. tis all i see :). ..*pets him* x3
buttfacemakani From: buttfacemakani Date: November 9th, 2004 06:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
*sigh* ok that's supposed to say 'could BE..moved up'

..it's that lack of speaking and typing proper english thing rearing it's ugly head.. i swear..
desertwalker From: desertwalker Date: November 9th, 2004 06:37 pm (UTC) (Link)
This one's really good. The only thing I'd look over carefully is the alignment of the nose to the tip of the mouth. Still,it will make for an excellent portrait once you blend the pencil marks into smooth shading, and maybe use slightly higher contrasts. Good job!

~N.N.
sorrows_crow From: sorrows_crow Date: November 9th, 2004 07:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
Looks good. The eye is a hair too small, though.
darkstar59102 From: darkstar59102 Date: November 10th, 2004 10:20 am (UTC) (Link)
the only thing that I can see is the far eye is very pointy and needs to be rounded some.
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