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If any of you want me to redline something within the next few hours/day, please e-mail it to me at thornwolf227@gmail.com

I'm feeling generous and helpful =) No one ever takes me up on this offer when I do offer it here on LJ, but seriously, I don't bite. Just expect a Yerf-style critique as well as some examples. I love to redline, but I promise I won't redraw your image. I hate doing that.

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katarina42 From: katarina42 Date: May 17th, 2005 05:32 am (UTC) (Link)
Hey, I always ask you for redlines! I have something in the works for a commission that I'll send to you, but not quite yet ^_^
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: May 17th, 2005 05:46 am (UTC) (Link)
But of course, I knew you were going to say something as soon as I posted this ;D

But you don't respond to my public LJ offers, you just ask, which I'm fine with cuz its usually something I enjoy =)
katarina42 From: katarina42 Date: May 17th, 2005 05:51 am (UTC) (Link)
I don't respond to public offers usually because I don't think they've happened to coincide with me actually needing something redlined! ;) I really do appreciate it, though ^_^
tapestryhounds From: tapestryhounds Date: May 17th, 2005 06:11 am (UTC) (Link)
I need serious help with this.
Anyhelp would be appreciated.
http://www.livejournal.com/users/tapestryhounds/8569.html
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: May 17th, 2005 06:35 am (UTC) (Link)
Okie for you, first I fixed the face, the muzzle is waaaaay too small and looks almost chihuahua like

http://thornwolf.somethinextra.com/shhead.jpg

And then overall I think you should lengthen the legs. Right now theyre a little bit too stocky and short and the far one doesn't match up with the proportions of the other right now. Also, the length of the arm around the zebra's neck is a bit longer than the other arm and doesn't actually need to be that wrapped around the neck. Zebra necks are quite flat so its not like its going around a large circumference, so a slightly more crooked arm will work just fine

http://thornwolf.somethinextra.com/shredline.jpg
tapestryhounds From: tapestryhounds Date: May 17th, 2005 06:45 am (UTC) (Link)
Thank you so much, that is so helpful! Those were all parts I was really struggling with but couldn't "see" it anymore. THANK YOU! ^__^
kitsuken From: kitsuken Date: May 17th, 2005 10:49 am (UTC) (Link)
Have you tried looking at it in a mirror? That can help you see the things that you might miss after a half hour of drawing it
ex_sighthoun238 From: ex_sighthoun238 Date: May 17th, 2005 03:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
*nod, nod* Yup pretty much exhausted that old trick, ^_~
chaa1 From: chaa1 Date: May 17th, 2005 08:09 pm (UTC) (Link)
so you'd know this one, eh? ^_^

I'm stuck on that upward hand, and i wanted a check for them abs. i know you rock at the whole position in general, so i thought i'd run it by you a second time.

http://yerf.com/forums/noncgi/uploads/post-6-83800-progress3b.jpg
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: June 2nd, 2005 09:46 pm (UTC) (Link)
sorry i havent been following up with that thread as much you're progressing faster than I can keep up! I'll look in from time to time on Yerf though =)
lilangelwings From: lilangelwings Date: May 20th, 2005 12:58 am (UTC) (Link)

darn

i wish id seen this post when it was posted! I would have loved for you to look at some of my work!
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: May 20th, 2005 07:03 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: darn

I can do something for you once I get back from Califur. I still need to do Chaa's too =) Go ahead and send it.
lilangelwings From: lilangelwings Date: May 20th, 2005 04:46 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: darn

Oh thanks so much. Im moving out of the dorms today so I wont be able to send anything until tomorrow probably. I hope thats ok.
lilangelwings From: lilangelwings Date: June 2nd, 2005 09:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
i know this is WEEKS past when i said id send you the sketch i wanted you to redline for me but my computer's hard drive crapped out on me *ick*

i would still really like it if you would redline it for me. If you cant, thats ok, but id figured id still ask. If you can, just say the ok and ill send it to you.
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: June 2nd, 2005 09:45 pm (UTC) (Link)
go ahead =)
lilangelwings From: lilangelwings Date: June 2nd, 2005 11:37 pm (UTC) (Link)
*squee* YAY! ok...sending through email...
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