As a follow up I'll open another post for the same so you guys can critique my stuff. Fair's fair, and I could really use the input.
Some ground rules:
-Not for the faint of heart. I don't like to sugar coat things. You will get an honest, brutal critique if I feel the need arises but note that I won't go "omg you suck!" that's just ...well..mean ;P
-No flaming or anything, I do this because people say they like it when I do, so this isn't some power trip, it's back by request
-I'll leave this post open for awhile but I will post an edit later when I've decided to end the offer.
So yeah, comment if interested =)
*edit*Okay guys no more! Thanks for all who commented but I need to wade through these first and then go vote today =)