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blazerwolf From: blazerwolf Date: October 30th, 2007 02:03 am (UTC) (Link)
I'm not in a position for redlining (no tablet!)

But offhand I can say that something's strange for me with her shoulder facing us. I know the sketch is incomplete, but it's hard to tell what that arm is doing?
(the hand looks good, by the way!)
Not that anthro anatomy is much different than human, but that stands out for me.

the eyes seem awkward (I've been having trouble with this lately also) I can't put my finger on it.

I would say for you to try flipping the picture digitally.. I do this with my work lately because the mistakes become a little more apparent this way. If it looks peachy flipped both ways, then it's a solid construction.



Er, not much help I dont' think, but thought I'd drop that in!
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: October 30th, 2007 02:08 am (UTC) (Link)
her hand is going to be hidden with plants and stuff so thats why I didn't bother drawing it, but yeah ive been having a /seriously/ hard time with the eyes. I don't draw humans much anymore and I'm way out of practice. Flipping it, now theres an idea i should have thought of. I'll try that after I get some more comments on what to fix. Thank you!
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