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tigrin From: tigrin Date: October 30th, 2007 10:16 am (UTC) (Link)
This makes me feel somewhat perverted to only have this to mention, but since it hasn't been... I think the right breast (her left) should be facing towards the viewer a little more. It's kind of squished towards the front as if she were wearing a bra, but since there's no support there -- and her arm isn't pushing it in any way to justify its position -- it shouldn't be where it is. When breasts don't have support, they naturally hang off the sternum at an angle to each other (I've heard you can draw a 90 degree angle from the top of the sternum to the nipples to figure out the position, and this generally works for me when placing breasts that aren't being affected by anything, but I've also heard this isn't true, so). It's unnatural for them to both be facing the same direction unless they're both being pushed that way. Umm, I could do a redline if that would help.
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: October 30th, 2007 10:20 am (UTC) (Link)
true true! and a redline would help :) I started coloring it already but its still in the early stages so I can futz with it to fix it >_>
tigrin From: tigrin Date: October 30th, 2007 11:38 am (UTC) (Link)
Ahh, I'm sorry I'm late then. :<

Here's a redline. I don't consider myself the resident expert on breasts, but this is kind of how I approach it.

thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: October 30th, 2007 11:43 am (UTC) (Link)
ah no i can definitely fix this in the version I'm doing now. thank you so much for taking the time to do this for me! its most appreciated :)
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