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Revised sketch
okay guys. do your worst.

JC they didnt have any mourning dove pics on corbis that had one flying so i had to improvise with the tail from a *sitting dove* pic.

http://vcl.ctrl-c.liu.se/vcl/Artists/Thornwolf/Sketches/yotedove2.jpg

crits and redlines very welcome

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desertcoyote From: desertcoyote Date: November 9th, 2002 07:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
Looks better! :)
Since Corbis didn't have much, I looked around my photo files and found these dove pics I've taken over the years- the top photo shows the underside of the dove's tail, and the bottom two show the topside, but give an idea of its tail in flight.
Here's the link, let me know when you see the image, - then I'll delete it (kind of a big file)....:
http://www.jcamberlyn.com/temp/Mdove.jpg
Hope maybe it helps. /\_/\
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: November 9th, 2002 08:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
hey thanx! this helps bunches JC, thank you =)

im still not too thrilled about the arms though. Starfinder said my arm length was fine...but yeah the paws needed to be worked with..now it just looks weird. =P
ill work with it a bit more. i think im just having a *bad art day?* lol
desertcoyote From: desertcoyote Date: November 9th, 2002 09:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heh, no prob. :)
Hmmm- one other thing I noticed was the shoulders bugged me a bit...like I wanted to see the upper arms just a bit longer and the shoulders pushed back a tad? It's a thought, at least.... just mentioning it.
thornwolf From: thornwolf Date: November 9th, 2002 09:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
well thats the the problem im having. i was going for the more *animal like* approach as with my "trust" picture. somehow i didnt do it as well as last time though =P i think i might just redo the arms alltogeher or something....theyre giving me too many probs
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